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Title: Seriously ill
Characters: Erin, Mr. Smith, Rose Smith
Words: 398
finished: 01.06.2015
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She was lying on the big bed, looking so small, so pale. Her eyes closed. Her breath was slow and uneven. Six days since she had gotten sick. And there was nothing he could do than to sit on the edge of her bed, hold her hand and pray. "Please! Please! Tell me, what did I wrong? Please, don't take her away from me. Not Rose!"
But God kept quiet.
The door opened slowly, and Gina entered. "Smith? How is she doing?"
He looked up. His eyes were red and swollen. For days he couldn't sleep anymore, hadn't been able to eat. "The doctor says there is nothing he can do for her. She will get better soon or ..."
He paused, unable to put the horrible into words. The thought to lose her was excruciating. Gina put a hand onto his shoulder. "I'm so sorry, Smith, she's such a sunshine. If there is anything I can do …"
Helplessly he just shook his head, and she left him alone again.
Erin was the next. She brought him some fruit and a plate of soup. He refused to eat; his stomach felt tied up into knots. But the young woman was not willing to give up so easily.
“You need to eat,” she said gently. “She will wake up again, and then she needs you.” And with shaking fingers, he grabbed for the spoon, cleared the plate without knowing what he was eating.
Kurdy was the last. He stopped at the doorway, only standing there without saying a word. Finally he stepped closer hesitating, passing a blanket to Smith. "You need some rest!”
"No! I can't! Maybe she will wake up ...”
“I will stay with her!” Kurdy pulled Smith to the old armchair, which was standing in the corner of the room and forced him to sit down. Put the blanket around him. Only a minute later, the little guy was fallen into a deep sleep. And Kurdy sat down at the edge of Rose's bed.
....
"Smith!"
He startled out of his sleep. His eyes fell on Kurdy, who was standing in front of the old chair. Realization hit him. Rose! Did he sleep for too long? Had he left her alone? It was then that he noticed the smile on Kurdy's lips, and he dared to relax again.
She would live. He wouldn't lose her.
Characters: Erin, Mr. Smith, Rose Smith
Words: 398
finished: 01.06.2015
:::
She was lying on the big bed, looking so small, so pale. Her eyes closed. Her breath was slow and uneven. Six days since she had gotten sick. And there was nothing he could do than to sit on the edge of her bed, hold her hand and pray. "Please! Please! Tell me, what did I wrong? Please, don't take her away from me. Not Rose!"
But God kept quiet.
The door opened slowly, and Gina entered. "Smith? How is she doing?"
He looked up. His eyes were red and swollen. For days he couldn't sleep anymore, hadn't been able to eat. "The doctor says there is nothing he can do for her. She will get better soon or ..."
He paused, unable to put the horrible into words. The thought to lose her was excruciating. Gina put a hand onto his shoulder. "I'm so sorry, Smith, she's such a sunshine. If there is anything I can do …"
Helplessly he just shook his head, and she left him alone again.
Erin was the next. She brought him some fruit and a plate of soup. He refused to eat; his stomach felt tied up into knots. But the young woman was not willing to give up so easily.
“You need to eat,” she said gently. “She will wake up again, and then she needs you.” And with shaking fingers, he grabbed for the spoon, cleared the plate without knowing what he was eating.
Kurdy was the last. He stopped at the doorway, only standing there without saying a word. Finally he stepped closer hesitating, passing a blanket to Smith. "You need some rest!”
"No! I can't! Maybe she will wake up ...”
“I will stay with her!” Kurdy pulled Smith to the old armchair, which was standing in the corner of the room and forced him to sit down. Put the blanket around him. Only a minute later, the little guy was fallen into a deep sleep. And Kurdy sat down at the edge of Rose's bed.
....
"Smith!"
He startled out of his sleep. His eyes fell on Kurdy, who was standing in front of the old chair. Realization hit him. Rose! Did he sleep for too long? Had he left her alone? It was then that he noticed the smile on Kurdy's lips, and he dared to relax again.
She would live. He wouldn't lose her.